Đề bài · Task 2 (Opinion)
Some people think that governments should spend money on public transport rather than on building new roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Một số người cho rằng chính phủ nên chi tiền cho giao thông công cộng thay vì xây thêm đường mới. Bạn đồng ý hay không đồng ý đến mức nào?
Cùng một bài · năm mức band
Band 6 nghĩa là
Ý rõ và đủ, câu đơn gần như không lỗi, nhưng từ vựng vẫn là từ thường và câu phức còn vụng.
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Band 5 → 6 · những gì tạo nên bước nhảy
- spend money for → spend money on (giới từ đúng)
- make more car → encourages more people to drive (diễn đạt đúng cơ chế, không chỉ đúng ngữ pháp)
- in my city they build → a new ring road was opened (bị động, tránh chủ ngữ mơ hồ “they”)
- it is better for traffic problem → it addresses congestion more effectively